So I have discovered and fallen in love with Infinity Pools. This has to be cliff hanging at its best.
Cliff Hanger Saturday is a place where you can post your favorite "cliff hangers" of all time or just good writing at the end of the scene. (if not your own work, please give credit to the author and the book.) We all know, a scene should not end with anyone going to sleep. YAWN. But sometimes we see this. If the characters go to sleep, so do we.
So share favorites or write one here.
I have been posting excerpts for advertising and Rogue Phoenix Press. If you are writing an excerpt for something make sure that excerpt ends making the reader turn the page and read on. Do we want the reader up all night? Of course we do.
From Rebel Heart Earth and Wind series coming soon. (The name might be changed)
All too soon, he strode the steps to the third floor, his mind in a fog. He put his hand to his head feeling dizzy.
"DeMontville."
He turned. "It is your day to die."
A bullet ripped into the chest and as he put up his hands to defend himself another struck him in the back. The world spun crazily as he groped at the handrail, trying to pull himself up to confront his assassin.
Tori—Nessa—Lady DeMontville—his eyes closed and he fell.
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